Hey, Steve. I'll tell you the yours and your groups strenghth and the weakness. The strenght of yours and your groups has a good grammar and a good prounciation and the the voice that audience can hear voice very clearly. Improvement comment is a yours and your groups voice need to ne little bit more has a intonation on it so, in the real life you can sell the product more strongly and joyously. In additionally, your groups need to has a lot of sound effect to improve the situationa it would more interesting commercial. Lastly, you should have a good rythem or situation that to the voice like it means you should have a smooth voice that countinuinng the other people or advertisers voice.
Hey, Steve. I'll tell you the yours and your groups strenghth and the weakness. The strenght of yours and your groups has a good grammar and a good prounciation and the the voice that audience can hear voice very clearly. Improvement comment is a yours and your groups voice need to ne little bit more has a intonation on it so, in the real life you can sell the product more strongly and joyously. In additionally, your groups need to has a lot of sound effect to improve the situationa it would more interesting commercial. Lastly, you should have a good rythem or situation that to the voice like it means you should have a smooth voice that countinuinng the other people or advertisers voice.
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